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  1. The Laundromat (0 replies)
  2. What happened to the old threads? (2 replies)
  3. My sisters girlfriend- feedback (0 replies)
  4. Does anyone do custom stories? (3 replies)
  5. Stories by "Cjack" Feed Back (0 replies)
  6. Mistress and her Shifter (1 replies)
  7. Liquid Lust - Feedback (15 replies)
  8. Riding Hard - feedback (13 replies)
  9. Chronicles...What do you think? (12 replies)
  10. Entrapment Maxine (0 replies)
  11. Our First Fuck Party by Hotal (0 replies)
  12. Disguise story idea/request (1 replies)
  13. Vacation without the wife stories (6 replies)
  14. my wife made me her bitch (1 replies)
  15. Feels really too f@#King good! F-M strap-on (0 replies)
  16. ~Surprises~ by Lilith (0 replies)
  17. Seamus, Charlotte, and the Showgirl by AZRedHot (1 replies)
  18. What do you think of Maria and Cynthia (0 replies)
  19. Ebb and Flow (0 replies)
  20. Feedback "Simone's World" (8 replies)
  21. Story w/pics by ronz56 (1 replies)
  22. Paragraphs! (1 replies)
  23. Something I've Been Working On (1 replies)
  24. "Therapy" (0 replies)
  25. War Zone (1 replies)
  26. Bliss (0 replies)
  27. Pink Flames (7 replies)
  28. I'm Loving Sister Julia Administers Discipline (4 replies)
  29. Park and Ride by AngelicVampires (3 replies)
  30. Chance beach encounter (1 replies)
  31. Cocktail party (1 replies)
  32. Feedback for the Neighbour's Daughter (0 replies)
  33. The Mountains (1 replies)
  34. Just Like That! (1 replies)
  35. Wake Up, My Darling (1 replies)
  36. bliss by pinkFlames (4 replies)
  37. Second Suck (0 replies)
  38. Room 21 (1 replies)
  39. Knot This Time (0 replies)
  40. part-time job (1 replies)
  41. oh, moonshine... (1 replies)
  42. God, it's good to be queen (19 replies)
  43. BBW in Minneapolis (5 replies)
  44. Dinner is Served (1 replies)
  45. The Dare Club (1 replies)
  46. The story of sister stephanie (0 replies)
  47. Jacqueline (0 replies)
  48. Senior-Year Spiral (0 replies)
  49. salt (9 replies)
  50. me and married couple (3 replies)
  51. Warming up (2 replies)
  52. The Fix (2 replies)
  53. Missing You by Lusty1 (1 replies)
  54. The Stars were perfectly aligned...... (0 replies)
  55. Feedback on Better than the movies.. by sunshine (1 replies)
  56. Feedback on Reunited by Kim Kelly (1 replies)
  57. Four Words by Kim Kelly (2 replies)
  58. please? (9 replies)
  59. Is There An Editor In The House (1 replies)
  60. Anything you say...... (2 replies)
  61. Feedback for A Night With Shanda (4 replies)
  62. Hot preacher's wife stories (3 replies)
  63. Feedback on "Our Anniversary" by Summergirl (0 replies)
  64. Feedback on (2 replies)
  65. Feedback on "Panties or Not?" (2 replies)
  66. Feedback on Work Stress Relief (2 replies)
  67. Feedback for Unbelievably nice. (2 replies)
  68. Feedback on A Very Romantic Evening (9 replies)
  69. An unplanned gangbang, sort of by Wicked Wanda (10 replies)
  70. Unfortunate Rising news (2 replies)
  71. Question For All Of You (7 replies)
  72. Feedback on Lunch and A Sexy Show? (6 replies)
  73. Feedback for "Sex-retary" (2 replies)
  74. Feedback for Three's Company (4 replies)
  75. her discovery (8 replies)
  76. Truth or Dare with Friends (10 replies)
  77. Feedback for "Revenge IS Sweet!" (1 replies)
  78. Jewelry Store Heist (3 replies)
  79. Hypothetically Speaking (14 replies)
  80. When I Wake up (0 replies)
  81. Feedback on my new story (1 replies)
  82. Bad, bad, girl (6 replies)
  83. Almost alone (3 replies)
  84. Feedback for Bast by Crouching Buddha (3 replies)
  85. Feedback for Rising by CrouchingBuddha (15 replies)
  86. Morning by jpredacted (4 replies)
  87. Audience Participation (11 replies)
  88. Masquerade (2 replies)
  89. The Commuter: Feedback (3 replies)
  90. Authors (1 replies)
  91. Our Blue Lagoon (2 replies)
  92. feedback: Too drunk to fuck? I think not by dirty girl (0 replies)
  93. First experience (true story) by dirty girl (3 replies)
  94. Feedback: Owning Pita (1 replies)
  95. Feedback: A Friend Indeed (0 replies)
  96. Feedback: Just one night. (0 replies)
  97. Foocuckold Story (0 replies)
  98. If She Only Knew (0 replies)
  99. I Was Urinating (2 replies)
  100. Feedback wanted (0 replies)
  101. Feedback: When She Comes (3 replies)
  102. Feedback: Pub night turns out VERY well (0 replies)
  103. Poetry~Chaos (1 replies)
  104. Fantasy Story Request (0 replies)
  105. Feedback: Hard work has its rewards (1 replies)
  106. Feedback: Out To Dinner (0 replies)
  107. feedback for "An education in PC?" (0 replies)
  108. Feedback: Friday Night Spanking (5 replies)
  109. Wife Learns to Gang Bang (0 replies)
  110. Master...Or Pet? Trilogy (0 replies)
  111. Drunk and Disorderly (1 replies)
  112. fzzy's Office Party with a Bullet (1 replies)
  113. My first story, Bitten. (5 replies)
  114. feedback for TASHKENT (1 replies)
  115. Hi, New Member Here (0 replies)
  116. My 1st encounter (7 replies)
  117. a couple of hot ones... (0 replies)
  118. She Was Late - by bobbachman (3 replies)
  119. New Raven and June story - Raven for Lunch (0 replies)
  120. I have a Surprise for You (2 replies)
  121. Out of Control (7 replies)
  122. Feedback on Revenge is sweet by dm383 (3 replies)
  123. Delightful Rendezvous! (15 replies)
  124. feed back on caught out (0 replies)
  125. Publishing Advice? (0 replies)
  126. Shocked at the lack of feedback. (12 replies)
  127. Donna at the Movies (10 replies)
  128. Feeback on Midnight storm (1 replies)
  129. A Sense of Power by IAK (8 replies)
  130. Visit My House Too Please (1 replies)
  131. "With Him" (2 replies)
  132. The Sheriff's Inmate by Moonshine (0 replies)
  133. An Outlaws Love by Moonshine (0 replies)
  134. Hey White Boy, by Dubblz (4 replies)
  135. Mountain Man's Slave by Moonshine (0 replies)
  136. Feedback on My Teacher,My Mom (0 replies)
  137. Feedback on "Me and Monica's interesting evening" by Silver Surfer (1 replies)
  138. Happy Anniversary by Hugh Jirection (2 replies)
  139. Redhead's On the Company Clock (7 replies)
  140. First Encounter by Loulabelle (2 replies)
  141. Feedback requested for "Anger and Tranquility" by Nightfalke (0 replies)
  142. The Wanting Rain~BIGbad (1 replies)
  143. Feedback on "Master and Pet" Series by Playful1 and DangerousPet (4 replies)
  144. Feedback on Janet and Katie: the Best Kind of Deception (6 replies)
  145. A Dragon's Lust by fzzy (1 replies)
  146. my toy, his idea ~ wyndhy (22 replies)
  147. The Visitor by Roxiebda (4 replies)
  148. I'm Sitting Here... ~ AnxiousHussy (2 replies)
  149. requestion poetry feedback (2 replies)
  150. Requesting feedback on Bedhopping (0 replies)
  151. Hot fucked Mom (0 replies)
  152. Tea Time by Dicksbro (1 replies)
  153. Feedback on "My dream comes home" (2 replies)
  154. Feedback on "Partying with Mom" (2 replies)
  155. Feed Back on " All Grown Up" (0 replies)
  156. Meanwhile - Pointless live and pointless sex acts (2 replies)
  157. Requesting feedback on Merry Fucking Christmas (2 replies)
  158. Feedback on Mina's Prelude (1 replies)
  159. The Teachers Tale (2 replies)
  160. Requesting feedback on The Dare:Shannon's Story (4 replies)
  161. Feedback On " A Beautiful Spring Day" (6 replies)
  162. Co-Story (2 replies)
  163. Feedbacl on "Unexpected Work" (2 replies)
  164. Feedback on my second story Instructor and the Student (2 replies)
  165. Aimee: TheTransition (1 replies)
  166. Feedback please (5 replies)
  167. The Electrician by Jallen944 (1 replies)
  168. Pantystories/Deutsche DWT-Stories (0 replies)
  169. Return of the Succubus (7 replies)
  170. Merry Christmas, Baby (2 replies)
  171. Summer lovin' (3 replies)
  172. Barrooms and Motels (2 replies)
  173. A Perfect Rose (1 replies)
  174. Britney Gets Gangbanged (1 replies)
  175. Michelle's Christmas Party (1 replies)
  176. Angie Comes Home (1 replies)
  177. Finding Ginger (4 replies)
  178. Kissing Katie (7 replies)
  179. Holiday Story (0 replies)
  180. Tess, her girlfriend and the New Toy. (6 replies)
  181. ~short sweet snippets~ by lilith (2 replies)
  182. The Promise (7 replies)
  183. the best kind of rule breaker, wyndhy (7 replies)
  184. Pearls in Oyster by Caroline (1 replies)
  185. The Camera by Caroline (1 replies)
  186. The Drow Concubine by 986960 (0 replies)
  187. Cindy's Sexy Customer (4 replies)
  188. Tender Flower; Eagle's Claw - Part 2 The Next Morning by Dicksbro (2 replies)
  189. Cindy Kim heats up the cookout by Cindy Kim (4 replies)
  190. Cindy Kim (6 replies)
  191. One Hot Weekend (by ImagineWithMe) (8 replies)
  192. Ever Have These Hot Thoughts by SWFsouthfla (2 replies)
  193. Oh This Is So Good, by Jag2888 (1 replies)
  194. Oh what a night!!! by kathy1 (3 replies)
  195. Flirting in the Kitchen by Flywater (1 replies)
  196. The Third Wheel by Nik Satyr (2 replies)
  197. Mistress Natasha by Maid Evie (1 replies)
  198. Afternoon Delight by Coaster (44 replies)
  199. Together Finally by Flywater (0 replies)
  200. Tess’s Summer of Exploration (10 replies)
  201. The Shower by imaginewithme (26 replies)
  202. happy slave happy mistress by lickinlover (1 replies)
  203. 0258223 and the Purity Police (3 replies)
  204. Another Busy Day by Midnight Kiss (2 replies)
  205. Small town dream woman (2 replies)
  206. Clio #3 - Locked In (1 replies)
  207. An Afternoon and Evening of Fun (2 replies)
  208. A Fast Car & A Hard Fuck by LarryL (0 replies)
  209. Jennys Strap On Penis-by LarryL (0 replies)
  210. Slut in the Bar by LarryL (2 replies)
  211. My Daughter's Girlfriend by LarryL (8 replies)
  212. Input (6 replies)
  213. A Bikeweek To Remember by connor (1 replies)
  214. sweet cum (1 replies)
  215. Beginnings~ by softpetals (0 replies)
  216. The Meticulous Plan ~ BIGbad (0 replies)
  217. Sheep #13 by BIGbad (3 replies)
  218. Homecoming by Sabbatkitty (0 replies)
  219. Office Fun by UK_dog (1 replies)
  220. Masked by Wyndhy (1 replies)
  221. An Experimental Vacation by wyndhy (8 replies)
  222. Summer Spin by Lilith (16 replies)
  223. Thank You by Wyndhy (11 replies)
  224. BiSexual MMF stories? (13 replies)
  225. Our Drive Home Together by imaginewithme (12 replies)
  226. Follow Along the DVD (1 replies)
  227. Fantasies by GingerV (11 replies)
  228. Wife Fantasy (0 replies)
  229. Something More by wyndhy (1 replies)
  230. Foreplay 1 by nzsmurf (1 replies)
  231. lesbian stories postponed? (1 replies)
  232. A Rose & Some Hose by Skipsthisone (1 replies)
  233. Hidden Magic - Part 1 ~ ashkeyana0418 (1 replies)
  234. The Priest's Tale by Glyndwr (2 replies)
  235. fzzy's Morning Love (4 replies)
  236. Flesh, Blood and Bone by Morrighan (3 replies)
  237. As I Slept/Spied in the Shower (1 replies)
  238. The Little Shop .... by Dicksbro (4 replies)
  239. Tender Flower .... by Dicksbro (2 replies)
  240. Waiting (0 replies)
  241. "Breast Wishes" by Pattiluvsit (2 replies)
  242. Dildo Walking by Cindy Kim (3 replies)
  243. Skip's Latest (2 replies)
  244. Together at Last by Imaginewithme (18 replies)
  245. Coming Out at the Christmas Party (1 replies)
  246. Just thinking about finding a BBW!!! (2 replies)
  247. Valentine's Day Treat by Glyndwr (6 replies)
  248. "Thank you, come again" too tame? (10 replies)
  249. stimulating road trip (0 replies)
  250. A Woman of Mystery (0 replies)