Feedback on "My dream comes home"

[flywater]

I would love to hear your feedback and opinions! If you have critisism, please keep it constructive and/or polite. Thanks all!


Dream comes home (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?p=867615#post867615)

[flutelady]

No criticism from me... I loved your story! Thank you for sharing it with us :thumb:

[Pegasusx62]

Excellent story flywater....would love to be the woman in your story...*winks* :x: