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Lilith
03-19-2004, 07:16 PM
The Priest's Tale (http://216.150.92.84/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=19429)

I like this one just a teensy tiny bit;) I think you captured the urgent yet calculated risk the delicious, demonic antagonist makes to take what she desires. Poor poor Father D. Good thing his name suits him:hot:

fzzy
03-19-2004, 09:05 PM
I wholeheartedly concur with Lilith, a great story!!

Zetacon4
04-19-2004, 10:26 PM
Delicous!

I enjoyed it very much. Dark, sinister, yet appealing and extremely well written.

I am currently doing a short story of a college co-ed who temps her local priest in the confessional and over time, draws him in so that she can have her way with him on the altar!

I guess this theme is a favorite! No demonic elements in my story tho. Just succulent nubile flesh drawing in the poor victim.