NastyGuy
04-25-2005, 05:37 PM
Me and Monica's interesting evening (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=24828) is a good short story, folks. There are 4 principle characters, although only 3 have sex.
My only other comment is that I would like to see it lengthened--either through a rewrite that explains some of what happened later that evening, or perhaps through a sequel.
Silver Surfer done good with this one.
My only other comment is that I would like to see it lengthened--either through a rewrite that explains some of what happened later that evening, or perhaps through a sequel.
Silver Surfer done good with this one.