Feedback on My Teacher,My Mom

[Dubblz]

This is my first attempt at this thing.Under the Incest stories section.I'd like some feedback on it.Also would like to know if it's set up right,or what I'd need to improve on.Going to do a family sequel,lol,so I'd appreciate any input.Thx..
Dubblz


Part 1 (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?p=932592#post932592)

Part 2 (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=24860)

Part 3 (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=24867)