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cellaphanepants
04-26-2007, 04:20 PM
I have been writing stories for my wife for a while. She loves them, but I'd like to hear what you guys think.
I also wrote "Late Night Sessions" (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=29022) .
More to cum.
sunshine
04-26-2007, 04:26 PM
You, my dear, ROCK.
That was a GREAT story! (Thanks for the props in there too. :) )
I like the part about the mirror. Great addition.
Clearly, you and I think along the same lines when it comes to what's sexy.
Good job.
Sunshine
sunshine
04-26-2007, 04:32 PM
PS:
The other story is totally hot too.
If your wife writes good stuff too, ask her if you can post it!
You write a great mix of romance and heat. I love it.
Sunshine
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