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cellaphanepants
04-26-2007, 04:20 PM
I have been writing stories for my wife for a while. She loves them, but I'd like to hear what you guys think.

I also wrote "Late Night Sessions" (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=29022) .

More to cum.

sunshine
04-26-2007, 04:26 PM
You, my dear, ROCK.

That was a GREAT story! (Thanks for the props in there too. :) )

I like the part about the mirror. Great addition.

Clearly, you and I think along the same lines when it comes to what's sexy.

Good job.

Sunshine

sunshine
04-26-2007, 04:32 PM
PS:

The other story is totally hot too.

If your wife writes good stuff too, ask her if you can post it!

You write a great mix of romance and heat. I love it.


Sunshine