My first story, Bitten.

[denandbil]

Hi all,

I would appreciate any comments or suggestions on my story writing. For those of you who haven't read it yet, it's in Boy/Girl and called.....you guessed it.....Bitten!


Bitten (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?p=1159917#post1159917)

[Lilith]

I read it. Nice work.

[sassee]

Very nice. I enjoyed it. :]

[denandbil]

Thanks Lilith and Sassee. I appreciate your comments. :)

[tkarvelis]

I enjoyed your story too. I could imagine the kitchen and the two lovers... It worked for me, and would love a part 2

[denandbil]

Thanks Tkarvelis, Maybe there will be a part 2. :rolleyes: