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  1. First time story... go easy on me
  2. Summer school
  3. Is It True?
  4. A Slaves Reward
  5. Guest: Part One
  6. the shower
  7. The Cupcake
  8. Bathroom fantasy (RP from Lilith\'s thread)
  9. The Tennis Accident
  10. The Intriquing Stranger
  11. The Teacher\'s Tale
  12. Jay n Vera
  13. My Sea Nymph
  14. Coffee Break
  15. Annette
  16. The Student Teacher
  17. Natasha and Aidan
  18. Tie that down
  19. In the Heat of the Night
  20. Screwing an Elf
  21. No Class Today...
  22. To Serve
  23. The Stables
  24. The Morning After
  25. The Carriage Ride
  26. Sex on the Beach- The First Time
  27. Ski Vacation
  28. Beginning
  29. "Sucking his cock" feedback
  30. Cindy Kim\'s Temp Job
  31. Three is the magic number
  32. Drummer Boy
  33. My Trooper Fantasy
  34. Friggin\' for Friend-Mark - the Second Visit
  35. Quickies
  36. Lacy\'s Surprise
  37. A Night Without
  38. Dare Party
  39. The Three Way Interview
  40. Megan And Sarah Feedback
  41. My Birthday - A Fantasy
  42. A New Experience
  43. men with their men
  44. Sweet Revenge
  45. On My Knees
  46. The Tease
  47. Welcome Home (Short Story)
  48. Cheerleading Camp
  49. Sibling Seduction Ch. 01
  50. Olivia\'s Journey
  51. Office Sex
  52. dreams and reality
  53. Mile High
  54. Fire in the South
  55. Was it Chance by Fireguy
  56. Wild in her Parents House
  57. poolside fun
  58. sex in the city
  59. my best friend\'s girl
  60. Carpe Diem (a true story)
  61. In Need of a Little Relaxation
  62. A Good Start
  63. Angel\'s Hot Weekend (part 1)
  64. Meeting You
  65. Blind Submission ~A collaberated effort story~
  66. Second cup of coffee.
  67. My First Time
  68. Strawberries and whipped Cream
  69. Inspirired
  70. Chance Encounter
  71. A Little Nibble
  72. The Red Dress
  73. Your Touch
  74. My Man
  75. Chris and Michelle
  76. The pounce
  77. Camping With some Friends
  78. Detention
  79. Being in love...
  80. I smile...
  81. I Resisted, But Not Enough!
  82. Bountiful Lady
  83. I Smile..
  84. The Secret Affair
  85. A Dragon's Lust
  86. True romance
  87. Nancy at the Football Party
  88. A question.. really.
  89. Pajamas ... by Lilith
  90. Summer On the Farm
  91. Brother teaches a lesson
  92. Story Feedback
  93. Susand is Stranded
  94. More feedback please
  95. Feedback on "An Apple for Miss Mindy"
  96. Let me know...
  97. Phone Sex for the Submissive
  98. Familiarity
  99. A Little Fun At Work by Jaylene
  100. Beautiful
  101. To Sir With Love
  102. Ignis Immortalis
  103. A Woman of Mystery
  104. stimulating road trip
  105. "Thank you, come again" too tame?
  106. Valentine's Day Treat by Glyndwr
  107. Just thinking about finding a BBW!!!
  108. Coming Out at the Christmas Party
  109. Together at Last by Imaginewithme
  110. Skip's Latest
  111. Dildo Walking by Cindy Kim
  112. "Breast Wishes" by Pattiluvsit
  113. Waiting
  114. Tender Flower .... by Dicksbro
  115. The Little Shop .... by Dicksbro
  116. As I Slept/Spied in the Shower
  117. Flesh, Blood and Bone by Morrighan
  118. fzzy's Morning Love
  119. The Priest's Tale by Glyndwr
  120. Hidden Magic - Part 1 ~ ashkeyana0418
  121. A Rose & Some Hose by Skipsthisone
  122. lesbian stories postponed?
  123. Foreplay 1 by nzsmurf
  124. Something More by wyndhy
  125. Wife Fantasy
  126. Fantasies by GingerV
  127. Follow Along the DVD
  128. Our Drive Home Together by imaginewithme
  129. BiSexual MMF stories?
  130. Thank You by Wyndhy
  131. Summer Spin by Lilith
  132. An Experimental Vacation by wyndhy
  133. Masked by Wyndhy
  134. Office Fun by UK_dog
  135. Homecoming by Sabbatkitty
  136. Sheep #13 by BIGbad
  137. The Meticulous Plan ~ BIGbad
  138. Beginnings~ by softpetals
  139. sweet cum
  140. A Bikeweek To Remember by connor
  141. Input
  142. My Daughter's Girlfriend by LarryL
  143. Slut in the Bar by LarryL
  144. Jennys Strap On Penis-by LarryL
  145. A Fast Car & A Hard Fuck by LarryL
  146. An Afternoon and Evening of Fun
  147. Clio #3 - Locked In
  148. Small town dream woman
  149. Another Busy Day by Midnight Kiss
  150. 0258223 and the Purity Police
  151. happy slave happy mistress by lickinlover
  152. The Shower by imaginewithme
  153. Tess’s Summer of Exploration
  154. Together Finally by Flywater
  155. Afternoon Delight by Coaster
  156. Mistress Natasha by Maid Evie
  157. The Third Wheel by Nik Satyr
  158. Flirting in the Kitchen by Flywater
  159. Oh what a night!!! by kathy1
  160. Oh This Is So Good, by Jag2888
  161. Ever Have These Hot Thoughts by SWFsouthfla
  162. One Hot Weekend (by ImagineWithMe)
  163. Cindy Kim
  164. Cindy Kim heats up the cookout by Cindy Kim
  165. Tender Flower; Eagle's Claw - Part 2 The Next Morning by Dicksbro
  166. Cindy's Sexy Customer
  167. The Drow Concubine by 986960
  168. The Camera by Caroline
  169. Pearls in Oyster by Caroline
  170. the best kind of rule breaker, wyndhy
  171. The Promise
  172. ~short sweet snippets~ by lilith
  173. Tess, her girlfriend and the New Toy.
  174. Holiday Story
  175. Kissing Katie
  176. Finding Ginger
  177. Angie Comes Home
  178. Michelle's Christmas Party
  179. Britney Gets Gangbanged
  180. A Perfect Rose
  181. Barrooms and Motels
  182. Summer lovin'
  183. Merry Christmas, Baby
  184. Return of the Succubus
  185. Pantystories/Deutsche DWT-Stories
  186. The Electrician by Jallen944
  187. Feedback please
  188. Aimee: TheTransition
  189. Feedback on my second story Instructor and the Student
  190. Feedbacl on "Unexpected Work"
  191. Co-Story
  192. Feedback On " A Beautiful Spring Day"
  193. Requesting feedback on The Dare:Shannon's Story
  194. The Teachers Tale
  195. Feedback on Mina's Prelude
  196. Requesting feedback on Merry Fucking Christmas
  197. Meanwhile - Pointless live and pointless sex acts
  198. Feed Back on " All Grown Up"
  199. Feedback on "Partying with Mom"
  200. Feedback on "My dream comes home"
  201. Tea Time by Dicksbro
  202. Hot fucked Mom
  203. Requesting feedback on Bedhopping
  204. requestion poetry feedback
  205. I'm Sitting Here... ~ AnxiousHussy
  206. The Visitor by Roxiebda
  207. my toy, his idea ~ wyndhy
  208. A Dragon's Lust by fzzy
  209. Feedback on Janet and Katie: the Best Kind of Deception
  210. Feedback on "Master and Pet" Series by Playful1 and DangerousPet
  211. The Wanting Rain~BIGbad
  212. Feedback requested for "Anger and Tranquility" by Nightfalke
  213. First Encounter by Loulabelle
  214. Redhead's On the Company Clock
  215. Happy Anniversary by Hugh Jirection
  216. Feedback on "Me and Monica's interesting evening" by Silver Surfer
  217. Feedback on My Teacher,My Mom
  218. Mountain Man's Slave by Moonshine
  219. Hey White Boy, by Dubblz
  220. An Outlaws Love by Moonshine
  221. The Sheriff's Inmate by Moonshine
  222. "With Him"
  223. Visit My House Too Please
  224. A Sense of Power by IAK
  225. Feeback on Midnight storm
  226. Donna at the Movies
  227. Shocked at the lack of feedback.
  228. Publishing Advice?
  229. feed back on caught out
  230. Delightful Rendezvous!
  231. Feedback on Revenge is sweet by dm383
  232. Out of Control
  233. I have a Surprise for You
  234. New Raven and June story - Raven for Lunch
  235. She Was Late - by bobbachman
  236. a couple of hot ones...
  237. My 1st encounter
  238. Hi, New Member Here
  239. feedback for TASHKENT
  240. My first story, Bitten.
  241. fzzy's Office Party with a Bullet
  242. Drunk and Disorderly
  243. Master...Or Pet? Trilogy
  244. Wife Learns to Gang Bang
  245. Feedback: Friday Night Spanking
  246. feedback for "An education in PC?"
  247. Feedback: Out To Dinner
  248. Feedback: Hard work has its rewards
  249. Fantasy Story Request
  250. Poetry~Chaos