"Thank you, come again" too tame?

[AZRedHot]

I see that 269 of y'all have checked out my story, and not a single comment. Sigh. Sniffle. Maybe it was too tame? The goal on that one was to be something different, more fun. However, I continue undaunted, and have posted another in the "Lesbian Stories" section. See if that floats your boat. It's called "Robyn's Roommate."

Once again, comments are appreciated.

Red

TUCA (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=18834)

[Lilith]

It's not too tame... I enjoyed it very much. Just had not gotten a chance to leave you some feedback! Looking forward to reading the next one!

[AZRedHot]

Thanks, Lilith--you're a doll. I don't feel so alone out here now. :op

BTW, I FINALLY got the corset of yours I'd been coveting.

Red

[intrigued]

I do believe I want in that shower with those two....... May I go as far as to ask you add to Robyn's Roommate, seems you have the talent for writing......

[AZRedHot]

Why, yes, Intrigued, you may. Thanks for your comments! I'm new to this interface, so I added it as a reply to the original, under "Robyn's Roommate, Part 2." I don't know if it'll show up correctly, but that's what you're looking for.

Red

[intrigued]

Showed up as expected, great addition...... Thanks for taking the time to write more....... Very enjoyable

[Crichton]

I thought the story was brilliant. It was original it had a fast pace (and a fast woman) and it gave a great story in so little writing. The imagnation was stimulated more by what was not there that had to come from the reader's mind. Excellent!

[Aqua]

I just saw this one for the first time. :) I really like the narrative and how it allows the reader to use their own imagination. I'm sorry I've been missing it all this time. :nod:

[AZRedHot]

Thanks, Aqua. I think that might've been my very first post here at Pixies. :)

[GusAspar]

AZ, I've only just read "Thank you, come again" for the first time, and think it's delicious!

[AZRedHot]

Thanks, Gus! :D