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Old 11-18-2002, 08:17 PM
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Night Moves...a poem.

NIGHT MOVES.....


I'll restrain your hands with silken cord,
tied up above your head,
you're on your knees and vulnerable,
satin sheets upon my bed,
you try to slip the knots
of the silken cords that bind
as my tongue prepares your body,
for me, to take you from behind.

The candles illuminate the scene,
on the air, your fragrance lingers,
the lace panties that you're wearing
I push inside you, with my fingers,
I hear your plea for me to stop,
no-one to heed your cry
and your moaning and your wetness
give no creedence to the lie.

I pull your panties to the side,
your hips begin to raise,
I spread you with my fingers
to my lips and to my gaze.
My tongue seeks your swollen pearl,
I stab you there and there,
I inhale the heady scent of you,
no perfume can compare,
I work with carnal purpose
as upon your sex I feast,
your next climax quickly building,
as your last has barely ceased.

What you've experienced to this point,
is simply, just a taste,
I'm kneeling right behind you now
I grasp you firmly by the waist.
with one almighty thrust,
my sword impales you to the hilt,
I inflict this wound of passion
without the pain of guilt.

The candle's burned much lower now
and how your body glows
This savage act of lust now
drawing quickly to it's close,
my essence boils within the shaft
exploding from the head,
your body convulses 'neath me
as we fall spent.......across the bed.
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:21 PM
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(((fanning my face)))) - very hot!
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:25 PM
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WOW!!!

Excellent writing.....please post more
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:33 PM
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:36 PM
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Hey Ms Fzzy,

Yeah something I like to do..at work...I'm employed at night in Medical Caring.....lots of leisure time in between bouts of major drama.....glad I made things hot!
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:38 PM
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Thanks Sharni,
see what I can dig out, some of it erotic humor......thanks for your kind words...we all love to be stroked.........
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:40 PM
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Glad I made you swoon Mistress Lilith.....(now while she's unconscious.)...........
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Old 11-18-2002, 08:59 PM
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Bronze...

I would sooooo love to help pick out those silken cords.. need any help?

Nice.. very nice.. *sigh*... can I bring you home?
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Well written and just plain good stuff.
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Old 11-18-2002, 09:13 PM
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Jen,

Seems like I'm chasing you around anyway, yeah OK..silks good because it doesn't mark the skin....unless you need it to.

Take me home?....yeah...just rollin' up the sleeping bag, or else I won't have anywhere to spend the night...will I?.....
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Old 11-18-2002, 09:17 PM
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Thanks Skip, what IS that guy doin' in your avitar with his kit on?

Line 1. Page 1. Chapter 1. in the manual entitled "Gettin it Awwwn for Beginners" says "Remove your clothes!"
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Oh my it is very warm in here .. excellent poem
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Old 11-18-2002, 09:43 PM
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Thank you Princess Do Me..I like to think there are other ways of raising a lady's temperature.....
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OH MY!! Very hot!! And very well written!!
By all means, do post MORE!!!

Oh, and I'm just a few miles down the road from jennaflower....if you like,you can stop off here to rest along the way....
And WELCOME to Pixies!! I think you're gonna fit right in!! Oh yes....definitely!
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Hi Sugar,

Thanks........ OK, I'll stop by, I'd really appreciate you doing your best to fit me in!......
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