Well I've decided to go for it and post my first ever story.
I'ts kinda long so I've attached it as a zipped Word Doc if anyone has problems opening the file let me know and I'll post a copy in a different format.

Thanks to Lilith for beating me until I agreed to post it. Babe you're far too good to me !!! ;)

Enjoy !

Attached Files

thetrainride.zip (17.7 KB, 3617 views)

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FussyPucker

There are only 10 types of people in the world: Those who understand binary, and those who don't...

Sarcasm: It's not big and it's not clever...........but it's funny as fuck!

The Special One!

It is excellent!!! Great story:p

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If I wanted your opinion, I'd remove the duct tape and ask you for it.~ Me
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One man's dream is another man's nightmare~~~~> §¤ Lilith ¤§
~>My Scribbles<~
==>Gone Shopping<== ~Just a Quickie~ *~A Celebration Vacation~* ~Surprises~ Sleeping With the Window Open
What Did You Do Today? Self Defense Class ~Short Sweet Snippets~ § Summer Spin § Story Challenge Submission Pajamas

Thanks Lilith you're such a sweetie !.......errrr I mean devil bitch woman with a big scary whip ! :D

ok did some fiddling and if ya can't wait to download n unzip the story you can read it here :-

http://www.fluffyknight.com/adult/trainride.html

it's the only thing "naughty" you'll find there so no need to go hunting around for other stuff lol

Let me know what you think :)

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FussyPucker

There are only 10 types of people in the world: Those who understand binary, and those who don't...

Sarcasm: It's not big and it's not clever...........but it's funny as fuck!

The Special One!

Fussy!!!!...... great story.......look forward to you posting more.....

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~ Nikki ~

"In love there are no rules".......Bono

*Sitting in awe of the wonderful story I just read!* There are no words I can type here to let you know, Fussy, just how incredible this story is. It had me twisting with anticipation in my seat. I couldn't stop reading till the end. It is captivating and written very well. I can picture the characters clearly. I can feel their personalities. You had me from beginning to end! Just wonderful babe!TY so much for sharing!!!!!!!

*sorry to sound like a Siskel and Ebert (movie critics) review but......I had to speak my mind!*

Mrs. Lix

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VENI, VEDI, VELCRO (I came, I saw, I stuck around)!

WOW Fussy... your story's excellent!!!!! I love it! :D

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Si à travers nos veines coule encore le sang...
Si dans les jeux d'enfants on entend encore l'accent...
Si nous sentons encore l'espoir de nos grands-parents...
Si dans les voiles du large souffle encore le vent...
Y'a jamais eu de Grand Dérangement.

That was a really good story Fussy! Thanks for sharing it with us... :D

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Put me on wheels and I'll turn tricks.

Clever? Nah, I ran out of that years ago. But if you find this, let me know, k?
"The road goes ever on..." ~ Tolkien

In memory of my friend skip...
Go then, there are other worlds than these

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Great story FP, just post it straight here next time so I don't hafta mess around with zip & word ;)

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Plug me into somethin'

If the theory does not conform to the facts, then the facts must be discarded.

No good deed ever goes unpunished

Never argue with an idiot. He'll drag you down to his level, & beat you with experience.

Fussy, you had me melting in a puddle...fantastic details :p But then again, I told you what it done to me....hehe

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Don't forget to stop and smell the roses *S* @};-

Loved the story Fussy. You set the scene so well that I wanted to be locked in the cupboard with you, LOL.

Great SEXY story!!!! :D:D Please write some more!!

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"I'm all for bringing back the birch, but only between consenting adults".
~ Gore Vidal

Fussy.........I reread the "ENTIRE" story. *wink*....just had to let you know! You have an untapped talent. TY again!

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Minds are like parachutes. They only work when they are open.

~Thomas Dewar~

Oh my!!!! GREAT story Fussy (I just have to find a way to get the temp in here back to normal!) jjjjbo

Thanks for your kind words everyone :)
maybe one day I'll build myself up to writing another one.

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FussyPucker

There are only 10 types of people in the world: Those who understand binary, and those who don't...

Sarcasm: It's not big and it's not clever...........but it's funny as fuck!

The Special One!

Wonderful and very well written story, Fussy!!! I loved it!
Now excuse me I need to go and cool down a bit...I got a bit carried away there towards the end! :D

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You did what you knew how to do. And when you knew better, you did better
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