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Ranger1930
12-27-2003, 06:12 PM
I Confess, im a Dreamer.
i get lost when i should working
thoughts of lust and desires
green fields and snowy peaks

my love is my life and her soul is beautiful
i don't know what im saying half the time im speaking
i babble on and my thoughts are elsewhere
i flow through my life without a care but one

she is my being.
my thoughts
my mind
my everything

soon we'll melt together
we'll take walks. and play
jump and run
sing and just have fun

to all those that are dreamers like me
i praise you. and please don't forget your dreams
they will come true if you believe
trust in yourself and your partner
because thats all you have in this world is eachother







sorry if its off beat... my poems normally suck..
i hope a few people can relate tho

RyanČ
12-27-2003, 06:16 PM
I understood your poem.

Ranger1930
12-27-2003, 06:26 PM
thx

btw if anyone else has something they would like to say about their lovers.. or lives or just anything in general please by all means go ahead... =)

Lilith
12-27-2003, 06:51 PM
He
He~ that which is not mine
He~ that which I ache for
He~ that which I shall never posess
He~ that which my soul thirsts for
He~ that which can quench my desire
He

Teddy Bear
12-27-2003, 07:36 PM
Originally posted by Ranger1930

sorry if its off beat... my poems normally suck..
i hope a few people can relate tho


Far from 'sucking' Ranger, I thought it was excellent! Your lover is very lucky to have someone express their thoughts this way.

Lilith, simple but speaks volumes and I can definetly relate.

Thank you both for sharing.

I wish I could write and tell you of my love...
How he makes my life complete in so many ways,
Filling that void deep in my soul,
Giving me love, laughter, life...

Even knowing 'we' will never be
and he'll not be 'mine',
It is enough to have even a small part of him.

Ranger1930
12-27-2003, 09:45 PM
thank you for the kind words..

and both of your poems are lovely. =)

Steph
12-28-2003, 01:03 AM
Wow. All three poems are achingly romantic!

Teddy Bear
01-02-2004, 06:04 AM
I didn't think mine was a poem. Thats why I said 'I wish I could write'. But TY for the kind words. :)


Any other poet pixies going to add a poem?

Grumble
01-02-2004, 06:57 AM
Hi Ranger

I like your poem, it stirred feelings in me

One thing I suck at is poetry, I am not a bad wordsmith at other writings though