I love writing stories .... not just here, but this has been a good place for me to write and learn and gain some confidence because of the positive attitude that is so much a part of Pixies .... so, I've learned a few things about how to tell a better story .... how to tell a better PIXIES type story, etc. ... but I know I'm a long way from knowing it all .... so I thought maybe those of us who like to write, and those who like to read could tell the things that work for them in a story they really enjoy ....

OK, I'll start ... I was lucky enough to have a person I met on Pixies teach me about not starting my sentences so much with "I", "He" or "She" ... but instead to start with more action words .... that little change has made a HUGE difference in the feeling behind my stories I think.

What's your advice???? or do you have a pet peeve that makes you "crazy" whenever you see it in a story???? or is there something you find particularly distracting when you are reading a story?

Fzzy the stories you write are very sexually stimulating and sensual. The way your imagination and feels come out in each one you write. Wait in deep anticipation for any new ones that come from your lovely hands. Sorry have no advice how do you improve on profection?

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kleclere - you are so funny and so NICE .... but I'm a long way from perfection .... and really I'm hoping that this thread could be read by anyone who wants to write a Pixies story (or other story) and they don't have to feel so much like they are jumping in the deep end (or maybe I'm mixing metaphores- LOL) .... so anybody have some advice .....

One of the other big things I've learned .... and I really didn't want this to be true (for some unknown reason of my subconscious brain) .... the title does matter ... in this kind of a format, it kind of acts like that "grab" line you start a book with....so the title should be accurate, but it should also grab attention of the readers.

Fzzy - tried to email you but system says no. Pleased to swap advice about writing if you want - email me!

Fzzy, you really do have the vivid imagination. Your gift is being able to transfer those thoughts into words to share with other people.

Thanks for sharing...

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