01-24-2007, 04:50 PM
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01-26-2007, 04:31 AM
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Just me.
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On this Valentine’s Day, I want you to know that when I’m near you, it feels so natural and beautiful. It’s like a walk in the woods, as refreshing as a springtime shower, as serene as a stroll on the beach. My body warms like sand beneath a summer sun, sending my passions soaring to new heights. Quite simply, you fill my senses with joy … let me hold you again.
Let me love you, sharing myself totally with you while drinking in your very essence, feeling a peace that transcends life itself. Let me lay beside you, holding you tight, and giving myself to you. Let me love you again.
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02-13-2007, 10:45 PM
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pixie of the wood
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here's my contribution....just in time, too. i need to start these things earlier.
He had the whole afternoon
And she was wholly his
He wanted to love
Discover
She crawled among the pillows, lost in a sea of covers
He followed
She turned, looked so good
And faced him
He cupped her head
Kissed her mouth
A dream
A whim
He lay her back
Took his time, she was his
For a while
For as long as it takes
No barriers
No guile
Just them
And her body
To discover
These lovers
He began with her hair
Unbound
Tickling her scalp
Tresses pulled though fingers
Curling it around
Holding her in place
With love and desire
Caressing the tips against her face
On fire
Her neck
Her throat
Now
Her lips, her cheeks, her eyes, her brow
He held her face in his hands
Ran thumbs along jaw
Slipped a finger in her mouth
Drew it out
Trailing it about
Around her lips
Tongue slips
Slithering
Sliding
Behind her ear
Hiding
He put his mouth on hers
Asked entry
She gave it
He delved greedily, dueling teeth and palate
Freely laving
Her tongue
Inside cheeks
And lips
Mopping up spit
Nothing wasted
Not tasted
Every second counts
He left her mouth
And licked her face
Along the bones
Touched her in ways
That made her shiver
Up the bridge of her nose
Over her eyelids
Quiver
Temples
Neck
The swirls of her ear
Down
Down
Fingers trailing
Down
Down
Tongue laving
Desire
Craving
Between her breasts
Drinking up sweat
Up
Spiraling up
To the swell of her nipple
Round
Gently biting, soothing dimples
Cupping
Pulling
Sucking
Pinching
Holding
Molding
No lost time, no unsought inches
Down
Down
Between her breasts
Into her navel
Swirling ‘round
Down
And down
Over her hips
Tickling nips
Of teeth and lips
Over
And over
To the vee of her sex
Licking
Lapping
Laving
Next
Probing
Sucking
Her clit
Her gate
Kissing
Hot kisses
Delving inside
Fingering, slide
Delving lower
Hot skin
Into her
Within
All of her
Both burrows
Hot tongue
Heat flare
Moist release, finger there
Down
Down
Between her thighs
Licking the crease
Around the side
Over her knees
Her shins
Her ankles
Holding her captured
With the arrest of shackled
Heart
And body
And mind
Til finally
Finally
Her curling toes
To start from the bottom
Find his way back
Every inch
Again
And again
He knows
And again
His body
His hands
His mouth flows
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02-14-2007, 05:32 AM
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Amazing.
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02-14-2007, 12:22 PM
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pixie of the wood
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thank you lil.
anyone care to take a guess which song?
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02-14-2007, 03:39 PM
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Here's my entry. The song is Billie Holiday's "Don't Explain."
I actually like this song better in the drum & bass remix version of it on the Verve Remixed cd collection, where the mood is totally changed up from slow jazz to head-nodding beat, but the sultriness of what the song means is not lost. A woman is so in love (and lust) with her man that she's willing to overlook him being with other women. In my version I tried to make the man look like a player type and the woman completely submissive...but towards the end, is he the one subdued by her? Hmmm...
I'm a bit halfhearted on the end result...if I had started earlier I would've executed it better, with more panels and background and made more of the sensual mood, but...oh well! This is what happens when the artist was out drinking on the night he shoulda been at his desk, perfecting his craft!
Happy Valentine's Day!
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02-14-2007, 03:56 PM
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pixie of the wood
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au contraire....very sensual. well done irezumi!
Quote:
Originally Posted by dicksbro
On this Valentine’s Day, I want you to know that when I’m near you, it feels so natural and beautiful. It’s like a walk in the woods, as refreshing as a springtime shower, as serene as a stroll on the beach. My body warms like sand beneath a summer sun, sending my passions soaring to new heights. Quite simply, you fill my senses with joy … let me hold you again.
Let me love you, sharing myself totally with you while drinking in your very essence, feeling a peace that transcends life itself. Let me lay beside you, holding you tight, and giving myself to you. Let me love you again.
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db, that is beautiful.
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02-14-2007, 04:00 PM
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Manwhore
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Quote:
Originally Posted by wyndhy
au contraire....very sensual. well done irezumi!
db, that is beautiful.
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Agreed on both counts!
No clue what song inspired you wyndhy, but your prose is fantastic!
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Put me on wheels and I'll turn tricks.
Clever? Nah, I ran out of that years ago. But if you find this, let me know, k?
"The road goes ever on..." ~ Tolkien
In memory of my friend skip...
Go then, there are other worlds than these
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02-14-2007, 04:30 PM
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pixie of the wood
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thank you aqua. there a few clues.
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02-14-2007, 04:55 PM
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awesome IK
wyndhy you have me stumped. I was first caught by the "down, down" and went towards Ring of Fire but now I just am stumped.
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02-14-2007, 05:04 PM
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Manwhore
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The moon shines bright above
Your eyes aglow meet mine
There’s no doubt it’s love.
I’m not drunk, but abuzz
All things have an aura of light
It certainly must be love.
I hear something on the air
A sound of joy so true
To answer back is fair.
Our chests beat so strong
A dance so rich and pure
Can this night last for long?
The stars fly like doves
Our feast over and through
It could only be called true love.
I’m flying and falling, alive
In the sky without a care
It’s ok, you’re at my side.
A man I once met spoke of
The greatest gift in his land
There is no doubt it is love.
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Put me on wheels and I'll turn tricks.
Clever? Nah, I ran out of that years ago. But if you find this, let me know, k?
"The road goes ever on..." ~ Tolkien
In memory of my friend skip...
Go then, there are other worlds than these
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02-14-2007, 05:12 PM
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pixie of the wood
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so sweet, aqua.
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02-14-2007, 05:16 PM
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terrific Aqua!
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11-09-2015, 12:59 PM
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Two Love Guppies Are Stuck On You
With apologies to Sam Jones, the alleged writer of the original Love Guppy the defending runner-up in a legendary "can you bottom that" usenet (predecessor to the Internet) love poetry contest.
I think my partner and I came up (?down?) with an even better (?worse?) one. This ?celebrates? the New Relationship Energy with a newly-developing relationship with a third.
Two Love Guppies Are Stuck On You
By 2 Cynical Popes of the Panty-Floater Discordian Cabal
Copyleft 2012 - All Rights Reversed
Feel free to copy, quote, use, misuse, or abuse in any way you see fit.
Like your car in the ditch
Like the boot on your car
Like a stake and a witch
Like the 2-month-old leftovers on a plate in your fridge
We are stuck on you.
Like the lime in your toilet,
Like the grunge in your bathtub,
Like your car after a 42" Michigan blizzard
Like the bill collector
Like the green dye in my hair
We are stuck on you.
Like sweaty skin on plastic
Like plastic wrap to itself
Like the KGB agent tailing you
Like the bubblegum on your shoe
Like your sub in handcuffs
Like your dom in boots
We are stuck on you!
Like the window during a blizzard,
Like the crust in my oven
Like the macaroni burned on the pot-metal skillet
Like the nut on the lug bolt
We are stuck on you!!!
Like the rusted union over the leaking water heater,
Like the car lock after an ice storm
Like the port wine in your carpet
Like glue in a school-girl's pigtains,
Like the Kool Aid on the white tablecloth.
We are stuck on you!!!!!!!
Like a phonograph needle.... "INA INA INA INA INA INA...." in the middle of Ina Gadda Da Vida
Like spyware on your hard drive
Like your wet hand on a sub-zero metal banister
Like the lid on a vacuum-packed canister
Like the Love Guppy in the original poem....
We are stuck on you, for now and ever more!
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