I don't have anything to add about your question re: Amy, but about your story .... you've already posted it in the Erotic Story section and asked for comments .... that's where it will be viewed by others who want to read erotic stories and we have a forum section for any comments that people want to make ... they are not able to make them directly to your story (used to be able to but haven't had that option for quite a long time now), so when someone feels the need to comment, they will either create a new thread about your story or add to one if there is one already existing.

However, just so you know, the number of comments is usually VERY low - even when the number of views to the story is high. We love having new stories posted, but if you post the stories thinking you're going to get a lot of feedback, you're going to be dissappointed. If you post the story because you love to write and enjoy the opportunity to share your fantasies/experiences, then it is a wonderful place to tell stories and the occasional bit of feedback comes as a very nice bonus. Welcome to Pixies!