BTW for those who care.....I have begun to write Devon a new story...look for it by the end of the week.

*waiting on pins and needles*mmmmmmm not as unpleasant as I thought it might be ... but hurry all the same;)

Lilith,
dropping by, German Steve urged me ... :)
who stole all your smilies? :confused:

Skip,

great story, dense athmosphere, no lengthes, turns me really on! That wicked lady, wow! :).. Nice imagination Dan manages to tame her in the next story.

If you stop mixing up telling from 1st person /3rd person perspective, it will be perfect.

Waiting for your next story ..... shivering with with anticippp....pation! YUM! :)

Groans appreciatively....damn...i know this story has been here for awhile but I just barely got all the way through it. Makes me wanna run about and by laytex clothes and spike heels and a whip....then run back out and find some sweet shy lil thing to turn into my sex slave... Grins wickedly...In my next life I wanna be Devon...

Great story skip, from every perspective ;)

Oh, and I loved finding the kink, Its what prompted me to go in search of this one.

HOT!!!

~~~~Swoons~~~~ This is the first chance I've had to read this all the way through and it's got me heading to the shower to take care of a few.....ahem...issues. Incredible Skip

Lilith - Pins and Needles are your fave

Dice - New perspective for ya.....look up from your ankles and say Awwwww :D

Sea Chelle - From one to another, thanks

TxSweet - Thanks!!!

DG - Better late than never...thanks!

A Devon streak has struck me over the last few weeks and I have written 3 more parts to this story. Is anyone interested in more?

yes please

Ohhhh skip im so excited I cant wait for more of this story *Grins*

Very interested in more from you skip!

I've read from beginning to end and over again.....it just keeps getting better everytime.

Do go on.........

Sorry to say, but this is the conclusion here.

Wonderfully told from start to finish. It was like a journey.

Thanks for the good read.

Shyabusa ~ Thanks!!