First Kiss

[vampeyes]

Ok I love y'all can I please get some feedback for my story? I want the good the bad the ugly!!!!!! Thanx :o :p :) :D

[skipthisone]

Well after I got done licking my fingers and moving around the buldge I now have in pants I can tell ya what I thought. This is a very good descriptive story. I find sometimes writers are not good at telling a story in the first person. You on the other hand tackled this job with utter perfection. I felt like the person telling the story and that is the way it should be. Keep it up. As good as this was it should not be a one time effort.

[vampeyes]

Aww thank you so much.... you have no idea.. you made my day :D