Seven Days Of Lust: Feedback

[souls_cry2000]

what did you think of Seven Days of Lust?

i am curious as to how you enjoyed the story thus far.

[Lilith]

Are you sure this was the first story you ever wrote? It was great! You touched on many different preferences people have. Is there more to the story? What happened to the couple from the book store, the story collectors? I am eager to read more......~~~~~~~~>Lilith

[souls_cry2000]

Lilith: It really is my first attempt at erotic writing. Until recently I had been suffering from a monumental case of writer's block. It seems I'm back in the swing of things. It's because of my goddess my muse that I have found my path once again. I've just posted another segment of the tale. I hope that you enjoy it.

[Lilith]

I am glad your Goddess has helped to unleash your creativity. All us Goddeses affect our loves differently.... yours causes you to be able to write erotically and I enable my love to complete various home improvment projects :D (that's what we Goddeses inspire when we get older). I am not so sure about that tub. It is not in my experiece to be able to visualize. I get the feeling it 1/would be hard to acquire all that spunk and 2/it would get cold before you could fill it up. The bloody wedding vows were interesting but I am always curious what makes people seek this darker path. Maybe your story will enlighten me. Thank your muse for giving me a fun read in between web classes~~~~~~>Lilith

[BamaKyttn]

that story of his, not only was I am muse I was an editor, cheerleader, distraction, task mistress and a all-around pain in the butt (ooh thats a different thread in and of itself...) but it still thrills me every time I read it.

Always

Kyttn

[BamaKyttn]

Lilith, as for the "Darker Path" I've found that many pagans, as Kaos and Razeel most assuredly are, are of the white majik. and even those of the black majik persuasion are usually more honest in their treachary. If you look into the history of christianity (ok sorry I'll go ahead and apologise for this, 12 years of catholic education coming out) there is the usual great Monks and priests and nuns but there are also the buying of divine pardons, the monks partaking of young boysand girls (and not so young boys and girls there was quite a scandal at my high school which was run by a monastary). anyway, I have been a pagan, Wiccan to be exact, since I was 13 it was from research in everything from Buddiasm to zoroastrianism I found that Pagan beliefs were closer to how I felt about a supreme entity. I have also found that many pagans know more of their religon than many christians who go to church every sunday and every other wed.s to catch up on their sleep. for example many do not know that Jesus was a jew, he spoke hebrew, he was not christian, he was a jew and he read the Torah and went to temple... ok sorry I'm getting side tracked... I'll get off of my soap box now... who needs it next?

Always.

Kyttn

oh Kaos, you have anything you would like to add?

[Lilith]

I am also well versed in Mythology and Religions hence where Lilith comes from. I understand that this excavation of religious beliefs seems to be very prominant in people of your age. I am aware of all the untruths surrounding most religions and it is truly my belief that one person's religion is simply another's myth. I am always curious as to why people believe what they do. I can tell you that often times I have received the answer you gave... catholic church, naughty nuns, priests, male dominated religion...etc. I am sure that with the way your man writes the story would be just as erotic if the couple were Ammish :D ~~~~~~~~~~>Lilith

[BamaKyttn]

Lilith, I was so afraid that I was going to come off too harsh and I'm sorry if it seemed that way, it's just that I've been attacked by many who don't understand their religon and fear mine as devil worship... sorry...

Always
Kyttn

PS don't I always seem to be stirring up something! I gotta learn when to keep my mouth shut!