Clowning Around

[Fornikator]

Hey all!
My first story (http://www.pixies-place.com/sub500-1000/586.shtml)

*clowning around* is my first attempt at raunchy writing.
I was just wondering if anyone had any tips, opinions, etc..

Just to let me know what they thought of it, if I should give up completely or write some more!

I'd also be curious to know what people prefer topic wise for erotic literature.


Thanks all!
Hope someone gets a kick out of it
:D

[dobbydog]

made me hot and horny

[Siobhan]

Very nice - I enjoyed it! definitely made my pussy wet!

I like your writing style - you manage to capture the desire and passion he felt for that girl - thats what really gets me horny.

I've written a story too - well started a thread in the interactive section - its called First Time Bi Girl - I'd love to know what you thought of my story.

:)

Siobhan

[Fornikator]

thanks for the feedback siobhan!
I was beginning to think my story must have been pretty crap for no-one to have responded!

I'll take a look at your story.....I love reading other peoples stuff...it's a way to constantly keep up on writing styles and what people are interested in!

:D