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Old 08-31-2004, 11:02 PM
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Afternoon Delight by Coaster

Well you sexy thang you have posted what I would say a wonderful way to spend an afternoon!!!!

Great work hon!



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Old 08-31-2004, 11:19 PM
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very sexy story Coaster....can imagine being undressed & caressed in this way....mmmmmmmmm :heart:
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Old 08-31-2004, 11:54 PM
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OMG Coaster, I loved this story!!

mmmmm.....Very sexy!



And your AV is great! yum!
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Old 09-01-2004, 02:35 PM
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Well thank you for taking the time to give me feedback! It is my very first effort EVER! So don't be shy telling me what you think!

IWM.... Thanks hun, wouldn't be a fun afternoon to try!
Pegasusx62.... ty very much..... wanna try it sometime?
Teddy Bear! ... thank you Your Sexiness!
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Old 09-01-2004, 05:16 PM
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Not only are you one of the sexiest men I know but your also a great story teller.

It was like I was there and you did it just right Baby.
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Old 09-01-2004, 06:58 PM
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Wow Coaster that was amazing! I loved how it had a romantic soft tone as it began with all the gentle touches and got a little more hot and heavy towards the end. Hot Hot Hot. I hope to read more!
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Old 09-01-2004, 07:08 PM
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Coaster, I love your story! I agree too... there's romance and tenderness, and a little bit of raunch. Plus, I love the element of risk- I've enjoyed taking a few risks, myself.

Great story, thanks!!
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Old 09-01-2004, 07:38 PM
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I am ready to be your afternoon delight please.
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Old 09-01-2004, 09:11 PM
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Well thank you for taking the time to give me feedback! It is my very first effort EVER! So don't be shy telling me what you think!

Pegasusx62.... ty very much..... wanna try it sometime?


you know you don't even have to ask...*winks*
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Old 09-01-2004, 11:48 PM
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MMM very very sexy,,,,,,Sounds like a great afternoon,,pr evening,,or any time of the day type thing :halo:
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Old 09-02-2004, 07:35 AM
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WOW..... Thank you ladies and for those that asked.... I do have another story in mind but it will take awhile to write... Stay Tuned!

Tess........ Gees tess.... right there huh.... Wooo Hoo!!! Thank you Oh sexy one!
Vurginne... So you like the romance AND some HOT action!!! My kind of woman! TY
FluteLady.... Thanks sweetie..... wanna risk it all sometime?
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Old 09-02-2004, 07:38 AM
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I am ready to be your afternoon delight please.



IWM.. OH IWM..... I'm more than ready to take you on a walk along the shore ... and then, well re-read Afternoon Delight!
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Old 09-02-2004, 07:41 AM
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you know you don't even have to ask...*winks*



So hun! How will I ever know what you want and when?

Oh watch for your *winks*! hehe
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Old 09-02-2004, 07:43 AM
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MMM very very sexy,,,,,,Sounds like a great afternoon,,pr evening,,or any time of the day type thing :halo:


Well hun... just think of this story the next time you are walking your western shore!!! Thanks sweetie!
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Old 09-02-2004, 05:31 PM
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IWM.. OH IWM..... I'm more than ready to take you on a walk along the shore ... and then, well re-read Afternoon Delight!


Hopefully we'll have a reenactment.....
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