Check out My story
 

Ok, well I wanted to show my gratitude to pixies place. If any one read my thread that i posted about being a lurker you'll understand.. i've been on this website leeching stories (reading) for a long, long time. I felt that i should finally give back something. SO i wrote a story, (mind you it is my first) i spent the last 7 hours writing it and trying to get it the way i thought before i started it. Since this is the General Chat forumn I was wondering if people could go check it out and leave some feedback. I want to know if i am on the right track..Only thing i have to make my next stories shorter..lol...I was on real creative streak that didn't want to end so i went with it...

Please read its in the members stories forumn called

Just a bit different...

Steinfibers..